Cool fanart also props to doing a tough pose. There’s a few problems with the body tho. The proportions look a bit wack especially the torso, and while I understand this pose requires foreshortening the weird proportions kinda throw things off. Also the left arm kinda bothers me with how small and skinny it is, also the left hand holding the weapon looks a bit weird too.
But again really good fanart kudos to trying a difficult pose I still struggle with stuff like this too. Keep up the good work